literature

Mockery

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The words
they drive me

                                                   c
                             r
                  a
                         z
                               y
They mock me

                    laugh

   i
                                     
                                      n
                                          g

at my weak

                   mind?

Uncertainty
             it's
   there    
                       or

                      maybe

                                       here?
I cannot
                                    lOOk

                any longer

Paper
     write yourself!!


                              I COMMAND THEE!
For I am....
                  (wo)man
I wanted to try something new and have a little fun. Especially since the only writing I've been doing has been papers for class, and I needed a creative outlet. 
This has bits and pieces of many little random things. 


Ready to hear about the inspiration?!?
My stupid paper.....It's only three pages....and yet...I am so done!! Hence no writing here for awhile....It's my fourth paper this week...
So this is me taking a break!
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NotenSMSK's avatar
I... personally like this :) the inspiration is my sort of inspiration :giggle: I normally don't like visual effects in poetry but here they suited well and I liked the concise message and the ending with the command thee and the 'woman' part though I hope that is more a subtle reference to mockery - the title itself than to a feminist approach :XD:

All in all a good work :)